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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 16:15:51 GMT
Wee! Look who finally has internet again? It's on my little sister's stupid computer that previously held only solitaire, minesweeper, and paint, and I hate the stupid keyboard and I hate the stupid mouse and I also hate the monitor and it doesn't have Word so I'll still have to go use the library computers and really I would rather pay than use this stupid thing. But anyway, that's not the point. See, I am going insane. There is a strange, invisible force that is determined to make me switch the order of two crucial scenes in my book, putting 'traitor' (the Logan-tortures-Arden scene) before "You're Not Alone" (the Ian-and-Arden-reconciliation chapter). I thought that I finally found a way to not make this happen, and I started writing the chapter that comes before "You're Not Alone" ... but then the invisible force planted "Hello Again" in my head, and I realized that it was perfect for the chapter I am writing - if I also add 'traitor' to said chapter. So, mainly this is just a little rant so I don't kill anything, but also 'tis a call for help, particularly to Matty 'cause I'm sure he knows it all best. Do you think it is remotely possible to but the Ian and Arden scene after Logan tortures Arden, or should I just bash my brains in and try to find another solution? Love to all.  |
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Post by Riley Pearson on Feb 23, 2009 16:19:14 GMT
I wish I could help you with this, lol But I barely know any of the back story of what happened in either of those situations So I hope the other two can help But I love you!  |
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Feb 23, 2009 16:24:05 GMT
Awww. Poor Jenny. *hugs*
If I could I would let you use my inspiron laptop to use but you live too far away and then I would have to steal my roomie's computer, the boyfriend's computer or go to the library myself where I don't need to pay....
Anyway, doesn't Ian and Arden talk before Logan tortures Arden anyway if I remember right? I haven't read the book in a while since you last sent me chapters... so if I am remembering right, then the Ian and Arden should come before Logan tortures Arden... sorry.
But on the other hand, I think it could work the other way, just might be more difficult to write or if you already know what to say in that perspective then it seems fine to me.
Sorry that I wrote a lot and I hope it makes logical sense.
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 16:29:59 GMT
Ah, I hate laptops also... lol. But thank you for the offer. And yeah... the Ian and Arden is supposed to come before the torturing, but circumstances keep trying to make me change it. Would certainly change the mood of "You're Not Alone" just a bit... *sighs* And thank you... you didn't write too much and it does make sense. I just wish my head would stop trying to explode. And of course if Matty sees this he'll probably just say something infinitely useful like 'whatever you decide to do will be fine.'  Grr. Lol, but anyway. |
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Feb 23, 2009 16:33:02 GMT
Awww, okay. Yeah that would definitely change it a lot seeing as Logan tortures Arden and then Ian and Arden would talk... that would be interesting to read though. No exploding of Jennie's head!  Haha. But we still love him. ;D |
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 16:45:43 GMT
Bit, yes.... And now I just realized I don't know why she would be distracted during gym class, if she hasn't talked to Ian yet. I'm sure I can come up with something though. Gotcha. No exploding. Yeah, but only 'cause we have to. |
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 17:02:49 GMT
Hm.... Just thinking 'out loud' here, so you can ignore me if it doesn't make sense. Unless you're Matty, 'cause I still need your opinion/help. So... as it stands: ch. 20 - "Hello Again" ---------- Keven Payne taunts Logan with news of Arden's betrayal ---------- Ian... wanders? wishes that Maddie wasn't all comatose-like? (they talk, briefly) ---------- Logan tortures Arden? (aka 'traitor') or  ? ch. 21 - "You're Not Alone" ---------- Ian and Arden reconcile - "Seeing both sides... isn't it betrayal of both?"ch. 22 - "Disarray" ---------- Fitzy meets Riyann ---------- Arden talks with Chance? discovers Rowan's death ch. 23 - ?? or (the way it was going to be) ch. 20 - "Believe It Or Not" ---------- Keven Payne taunts Logan with news of Arden's betrayal ---------- Ian... wanders? wishes that Maddie wasn't all comatose-like? (they talk, briefly) ---------- Arden enters small classroom and sits there (very brief scene, obviously) ch. 21 - "You're Not Alone" ---------- Ian and Arden reconcile - "Seeing both sides... isn't it betrayal of both?"ch. 22 - "Disarray" ---------- Fitzy meets Riyann ---------- 'traitor' aka Logan tortures Arden ch. 23 - ?? ---------- ?? ---------- Arden talks with Chance, finds out about Rowan ... So... yeah. |
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Post by Logan Andrews on Feb 23, 2009 17:07:05 GMT
 ... Um... I like the first one...the list that goes first...I like that one. That is my opinion. Feel free to ignore it. Because 'whatever you decide to do will be fine'.  lol. |
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 17:13:26 GMT
Mm... I like it too, yes. Except for the obvious difficulty of switching those scenes around.
Lol, you suck, by the way. But we love you 'cause we have to.
And I am now going to go on a walk and also eat. And eventually, hopefully, I shall figure all this out.
Lovely to see you. *salutes*
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Post by Logan Andrews on Feb 23, 2009 17:15:34 GMT
Yes...I imagine that would be difficult...but you are Jennie and you'll figure it out. Lol. You suck too. Yeah, you better love me. Meh. Well, now you just suck more, obviously, for leaving as soon as I get here. |
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 18:12:07 GMT
Thank you for the confidence... have a half-eaten ice cream sandwich. And meh... obviously you should have been here sooner then. Duh. |
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Post by Logan Andrews on Feb 23, 2009 18:19:00 GMT
You're welcome. But ew...rather not. Uh...well, no. Actually. I send my army of towels after you, so let that be a lesson. |
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 18:24:37 GMT
Aw, why not? 'Twas creamy and delicious. *shakes head* That's what you think. And ha! I'll borrow Laura's lighter and set them all ablaze! Muahahaha! ... So how might you be? |
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Post by Logan Andrews on Feb 23, 2009 18:29:23 GMT
Hm...creamy and delicious... That's what I know. I know all. Gasp! You pyromaniac. I'm okay. And how are you? |
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 18:37:46 GMT
Lol... what's wrong with that? Pfft. You wish. *chuckles evilly* And I am okay too. *nods* |
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Post by Logan Andrews on Feb 23, 2009 18:40:02 GMT
The phrase 'creamy and delicious' strikes a chord in my sick and dirty mind... But besides that, it still sounds kind of disgusting. Psht. I have no need of wishes! ;D *backs away* This is good. Anything interesting happening/happened lately/going to happen soon? |
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 18:45:25 GMT
... Okay then... What the hell kind of person doesn't like ice cream sandwiches?  ... Um... well, there's the internetness.... And also it's my day off. (;D) But I think that that's about it. How about you? Methinks that you and Nina should have a thread, by the way. |
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Post by Logan Andrews on Feb 23, 2009 18:48:59 GMT
Yeah... Well...me obviously. backatcha. Yay for day off! That's awesome. My glasses ran away but they came back! Mm, this is a good idea. We probably should. |
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 18:56:13 GMT
*shakes head* Well, yeah, but what kind of person does that make you? Weirdo. ;D And it is! 'Specially after working five days in a row. Lol, nice. ... Didn't Andy do that too? Lose his new glasses like two days after he got 'em? Aye... you definitely should. ... 'Cause I don't think I'll be making that Fitzy thread terribly soon, and I do not wish you to be bored. |
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Post by Logan Andrews on Feb 23, 2009 18:59:27 GMT
Haha. A weirdo? Ew, five days in a row. to that. Lol, I think he did, yeah. But did he ever find them again? And I'm fairly sure he did it on purpose... He probably put mine in the freezer for me, to help me along in the path of glasses losing ability. *nods solemnly* Haha, alright. Nah, I'm not bored. Youtube-ing between replies, so I am fairly content and unbored. |
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 19:10:20 GMT
Yeps. Weirdo. Yeah, definitely. ... Not that I recall. And yeah, also pretty sure it was on purpose. Lol, probably. Well, I think you should rp because I want to read it then. I am also YouTubing... on my brother's computer 'cause I don't think this one could handle it at the same time as the site... lol. But I can't find a non-live version of a song I want. |
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Post by Logan Andrews on Feb 23, 2009 19:13:05 GMT
Well, that's just mean. Well, yeah, stalker. Woo for youtube! lol, oh dear. Meh to that. What song are you looking for? |
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 19:21:47 GMT
... Not sure if I should agree or not because I'm not really certain what's mean. That I am, and proud of it. Wee! Ah well though. 'Tis "Throwing It All Away" by Phil Collins. I heard it on the radio the other day and parts of it made me think of Arden and Logan, so I was going to see if I could find a line to use as personal text. Guess I can just find the lyrics though. *shrug* So what sort of things are you YouTubing? |
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Post by Logan Andrews on Feb 23, 2009 19:24:39 GMT
Uh...calling me a weirdo, I think. Yay stalking then! I see... Sounds cool. Eh...Connor sent me a video of some kid licking an electric fence. lol. But now I'm listening to music. |
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 19:34:00 GMT
Hm... well, in that case it is mean but also true. ;D Yeps.... ... And that sounds... amusing. But music is good. |
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Post by Logan Andrews on Feb 23, 2009 19:35:23 GMT
That's true! Indeedles. ;D It was! Haha, that poor idiot kid. Music is good. This is true. |
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 19:44:19 GMT
;D
Gah, it is so wrong to laugh at that... *shakes head*
;D What sortage of music might you be enjoying then?
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Post by Logan Andrews on Feb 23, 2009 19:47:19 GMT
;D ;D ;D
Lol! But he was stupid enough to do it. And he did it three times! Three!
The Rasmus at the moment. I heard Justify the other day and now I am quite hooked.
Did you find that song that you were looking for?
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Post by Arden Patricks on Feb 23, 2009 19:56:13 GMT
... ... True. You have a point. And I've never heard of either of those. Well, I found the lyrics anyway. But I don't think I'm going to use it. |
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Post by Logan Andrews on Feb 23, 2009 20:02:01 GMT
Love you! Random affection... Lol. xD Ah, they're quite good. Cool...sorta? Hm, have you seen The Happening? Cos I've been half-watching it with Sephy and Davis, and I'm not sure if I just wasn't paying enough attention or if the grand twist really was 'the plants did it'. |
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