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Post by Arden Patricks on Aug 19, 2008 1:39:35 GMT
 That is rather annoying. I'd hate to work eight days in a row. And meh... I'm pretty good though. Would you like some ice cream cake leftover from Laura's birthday? |
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Aug 19, 2008 2:38:14 GMT
Yeah... different hours too.
Mmmm.
Even though I just had ice cream. =]
And I finally read your story... I love it. =]
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Post by Arden Patricks on Aug 19, 2008 2:42:27 GMT
Eh... it's sort of imaginary ice cream,. so that's all good. And  ! Yay! (Even though I've edited since then and really should've sent you a new one.) Any specific comments? |
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Aug 19, 2008 2:48:43 GMT
=]
;D
Well, my favorite scenes in it was the whole Logan introduction. It was mastered perfectly. I actually felt a little sick when he continued to cut into Maddie's skin, in the forest and in Maddie's point it was very like her as well. Very good description throughout.
Also the way you describe everyone and how they talk with each other is so funny and amazing as well.
But the Fitzy parts just don't keep my interest for some reason as much as the rest of it does. I don't know why though.
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Post by Arden Patricks on Aug 19, 2008 2:58:00 GMT
;D
Hm. Can't really take credit for most of the Logan nd Maddie stuff, of course - I just edited what Matty and Christina originally wrote.
And hm. I've actually been a bit afraid that the Fitzy scenes would be more interesting than the Arden ones, so that's interesting.
Would you like an updated copy, by the way, up though chapter eight?
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Aug 19, 2008 3:37:35 GMT
If it's 70 pages total I have it all. =]
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Post by Arden Patricks on Aug 19, 2008 3:50:29 GMT
Huh... I guess you do then, pretty much. I don't remember sending that to you though.
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Aug 19, 2008 3:58:26 GMT
Nina sent it to me a while ago, if that's okay...
*hides*
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Post by Arden Patricks on Aug 19, 2008 3:59:54 GMT
Ah... yes, that would make sense. And nah, it's okay, since it's you. I wouldn't want it sent to anyone I don't know or something, but you are allowable. *nods*
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Aug 19, 2008 4:07:34 GMT
Okay.
I wanted to read it and deleted my yahoo account so I couldn't so I asked her.
It would be my fault not hers.
Is there anymore of it?
I'm in this state of must. have. more. =]
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Post by Arden Patricks on Aug 19, 2008 4:13:47 GMT
All right then.... And not very much. I've finished chapter eight and started nine, but that's about it. *looks guilty for bad work ethic* But I should be going now, so see you tomorrow.  |
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Aug 19, 2008 4:25:33 GMT
Aww that's okay.
I'm just addicted to it now. XD
Okay dok. I won't be on though til goodness. pass midnight, unless you're on in the morning before 2. =]
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Post by Arden Patricks on Aug 20, 2008 0:22:20 GMT
;D Well, that's rather lovelyful to hear.
I do have to ask you, by the way, what you thought of chapter six, with the flashback dealy and such.
Hwhew... that's late. And probably not.
So how might you be?
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Sept 4, 2008 1:52:13 GMT
............
Uhhh. Hi!
*waves*
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Post by Arden Patricks on Sept 4, 2008 1:56:50 GMT
*waves back* ... Hm. Um... would you like some twizzlers? |
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Sept 4, 2008 2:27:51 GMT
I love twizzlers. =]
would you like some apple jacks?
They don't taste like apples. lol.
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Post by Fitzy Patricks on Sept 4, 2008 2:34:01 GMT
This is true, they do not. But still, they are yummy. So yes, thank you, I believe I shall. |
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Sept 4, 2008 3:29:07 GMT
So how are you Jennie? =]
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Post by Fitzy Patricks on Sept 4, 2008 3:32:36 GMT
I'm pretty good. Nothing much going on, I guess. |
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Sept 4, 2008 3:39:52 GMT
Okay then.
So what drama do you have with Fitzy?
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Post by Fitzy Patricks on Sept 4, 2008 3:46:01 GMT
Um... pretty much nothing. Actually, he's quite boring and I hope that the guy playing Travis comes online soon so that something can happen with Arden.
What've you got going on with Shelby?
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Sept 4, 2008 3:50:26 GMT
Nothing honestly.
Just a few people think she's still Ruby and that she killed Shell, but eh that's getting bland.
That's why I asked if you had anything for Fitzy so maybe we could bond or dramaless lives.
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Post by Fitzy Patricks on Sept 4, 2008 3:57:08 GMT
Hm.... Perhaps we could start something? No idea what. But I should be going now, as it's late. See you sometime. |
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Sept 4, 2008 4:13:55 GMT
Yay for plotting.
Okay then.
See you laters. =]
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Post by Arden Patricks on Sept 4, 2008 13:35:11 GMT
Yep. Hm. 'Course, the only things coming to mind are romancy sorts of things. Hm.... So how might you be? |
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Sept 9, 2008 4:10:50 GMT
Hahaha. that would be funny. XD
But feels sick. My tummy keeps getting upset lately. =[
How about you?
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Post by Arden Patricks on Sept 9, 2008 4:15:13 GMT
Jourdan! Hello! Lol... yeah, might be. Meh.  That's not cool. *magic feel-betterness hug* I'm all right though. Being amused by my brother's irreverent Lord of the Rings discussion comparing Gandalf to Jesus...  |
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Sept 9, 2008 4:20:15 GMT
;D
Well he all freaked out last time when she simply kissed him... lol. Any ideas of how that would work though?
And um. That's interesting? ^ ^
Sorry I haven't answered again. I'll answer the thread in a minute... I need to eat something cause of my tummy. It's werid... but maybe I'll answer first cause I don't know when you're leaving... and now I'm rambling to myself. Sorry again. =/
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Post by Fitzy Patricks on Sept 9, 2008 4:24:26 GMT
Not really. I've only just started rping him again, so I'm not real sure what he's like anymore. And coming up with drama's always hard. Very... lol. Rightio... food is good for you. And really I should be gone by now, but I haven't seen you in ages so I'll stick around. |
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Post by Shelby Crescent on Sept 9, 2008 4:28:56 GMT
Yay for sticking around. I know drama is hard. Maybe he could start to like Shell but won't admit it even though he knows he does, just not to her or anyone else kind of thing for a while? Mhm. Wants cereal but I'll wait cause I rather talk to you too. |
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That is rather annoying. I'd hate to work eight days in a row.
! Yay! (Even though I've edited since then and really should've sent you a new one.)
That's not cool. *magic feel-betterness hug*