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Post by Riley Pearson on May 11, 2009 17:48:06 GMT
Woo! And yay  I have lots of time to work on homework now.. We got out early cos we were just reviewing the same info as the last two weeks, lol |
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Post by Arden Patricks on May 11, 2009 17:49:35 GMT
Woo! *cheers* Yay for more homework time! And that makes a fair bit of sense then.  |
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Post by Logan Andrews on May 11, 2009 17:54:54 GMT
Woot for homework! ;D Hm...sounds enthralling... |
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Post by Riley Pearson on May 11, 2009 17:56:18 GMT
Yay! haha ;D Oh yes... quite enthralling So what're you guys up to? |
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Post by Arden Patricks on May 11, 2009 17:58:15 GMT
 Wee! ... Eh. I'm trying to bludgeon my brain into work-mode so's I can find a title for chapter twenty-five. |
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Post by Riley Pearson on May 11, 2009 18:00:25 GMT
Oooooh good luck... |
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Post by Logan Andrews on May 11, 2009 18:02:14 GMT
Ooooh 25.
What happens in that one?
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Post by Riley Pearson on May 11, 2009 18:10:36 GMT
Stacy says "Matttyyy!" And she likes cats And apparently "her mom has nice legs" And the David Tennant cut-out is creepy. haha |
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Post by Arden Patricks on May 11, 2009 18:13:00 GMT
Thankies. ... And... that's kinda the problem. I don't really know. 'Cause I've decided it's too weird to finish the funeral scene and launch straight into the whole Arden-Logan confrontation, so I'm working on a transition... but I'm not quite sure what needs to happen in that. |
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Post by Logan Andrews on May 11, 2009 18:13:56 GMT
Staccccyyyyyyy! Cats are...lovely, yes... Your mom has nice legs? And David Tennant is creepy in general, not just cut-out form.  But oooh...that does sound problematic. Yep, good luck... |
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Post by Riley Pearson on May 11, 2009 18:15:23 GMT
Lol And we've been told that she does, lol And lol, she wants you to admit that he has nice hair Ooooo Question mark |
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Post by Arden Patricks on May 11, 2009 18:18:04 GMT
Mm... yep. I do have the scene that I wrote the other day where Fitzy has to endure some of his idiot classmates gossiping about Jake, but that's it. |
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Post by Logan Andrews on May 11, 2009 18:21:15 GMT
Haha, good for your mom then. And lol, what? Why would I admit David Tennant has nice hair? Ooooh. Can I read that scene soon? |
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Post by Arden Patricks on May 11, 2009 18:25:35 GMT
Pfft. 'Cause we know you secretly believe it? Duh. (Was going to take your side here, but it's too much fun to tease you. ) Mm... eh, maybe. After you give me some feedback on the last stuff I sent you, perhaps. |
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Post by Riley Pearson on May 11, 2009 18:25:37 GMT
Lol She said "you're allowed to think he's creepy if you acknowledge his amazing hair because it's amazing!" *wild hand gestures* edit: yay Jennie! !!! |
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Post by Logan Andrews on May 11, 2009 18:35:19 GMT
Lol, thank you so much for that Jennie, really. What was the last bit you sent me that I didn't feedback on? And lol, lovely wild hand gestures there... I can think he's creepy anyway. And I'm fairly indifferent towards his hair? |
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Post by Arden Patricks on May 11, 2009 18:38:06 GMT
 Love you muchly. Um... and it's the finished 23 and 24, I believe. I dunno, any thoughts? |
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Post by Riley Pearson on May 11, 2009 18:38:55 GMT
Lol ;D
Aaaaand I don't think she's said anything
Lol, I'll have to check
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Post by Logan Andrews on May 11, 2009 18:43:25 GMT
Yeah, you better. Oooh, rightio. Well then. Thoughts...ah...about anything in particular? The funeral chapter was a sadness. I don't know about the lots of POV switching, but I guess it's sort of necessary. So...I don't know. Very good, as usual. ;D Lol, thank you Nina. ;D |
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Post by Arden Patricks on May 11, 2009 18:47:45 GMT
I do, but only because I'm afraid of you of course. Eh, well, I suppose it would be sad, yes. Hm. You didn't like the POV switching? Was it confusing or what? Oh, and as for specifics - how about the flashbackiness? Any thoughts on that? |
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Post by Riley Pearson on May 11, 2009 18:47:51 GMT
She's talking about flamingos... haha She says, "But but it's hair and it's glorious and ahh", Lol You need a skype so you can hear/see us, haha Will you get one if you don't have to talk or anything? It's just really difficult to type things to you when she talks, haha xD ;D |
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Post by Logan Andrews on May 11, 2009 18:52:04 GMT
Well then. Haha. Nah...it's not that it was overly confusing...I don't know. Just seemed a little broken up, but not like disjointed cos it all flowed well...fuck, I don't know what I'm saying. Just ignore me. The flashbackiness was lovely, yes. Oooh flamingos are awesome. Lol...oh right...fine, his hair is absolutely glorious and lovelyful. Gah, skype...noooooooo! ;D |
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Post by Riley Pearson on May 11, 2009 18:54:05 GMT
Yay! You've made her happyful ;D And sighs, not even if you can just type to us? you can hear/see us, but we can't hear/see you? ! |
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Post by Arden Patricks on May 11, 2009 18:55:01 GMT
Eh... no, actually, I change that statement. I love you 'cause you're so cute and cuddly. ... Huh. All right, so it wasn't confusing and it wasn't disjointed... just kind of startling that it changed so much or what? And all right, long as that worked. 'Cause I still wanted to use parts of that scene without having to properly write it. |
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Post by Riley Pearson on May 11, 2009 18:58:15 GMT
Hahaha, Yes! Matty you're cute and cuddly! *I had to agree with that* |
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Post by Logan Andrews on May 11, 2009 19:02:09 GMT
I'm glad I made her happyful! ;D Eh...uh...maybe. I don't know. *hides* ! Lol, ah...thanks. Yes! Kind of startling works. Ah, yeah, it was good. Better than having the whole scene. And thank you Nina... |
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Post by Riley Pearson on May 11, 2009 19:06:50 GMT
And I'm sure she'd say something, but she's left already, lol ;D sighs... okay  ! Lol, you're welcome. ! |
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Post by Arden Patricks on May 11, 2009 19:06:52 GMT
;D Ah, all right then. Long as it's not actually bad. And so... just as soon as I finish looking it over and editing it, I think I shall send you that scene. |
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Post by Logan Andrews on May 11, 2009 19:09:29 GMT
Lol, alright. ! Psht, of course it's not bad. And yay, thank you. |
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Post by Arden Patricks on May 11, 2009 19:10:54 GMT
Well, it could be. *shrug* |
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Wee! 
Love you muchly. 